Tuesday 12 August 2014

Creative Writing Competition Entry - Mikayla

The Wonder Group

As the alarm bell rang four of the evilest villains escaped from the down town jail.They were in jail for less than a day and still managed to get out. The down town police had the town in full lock down. Most of the people were scared of these villians but not the wonder group. The wonder group loved saving innocent life's after all that was their job. The wonder group always had an over the top entrance. The next day there was a fair held in their honour there were games rides and plenty of food.

The villians heard about this wonder group fair and they had to go so they put on their odd looking disguises and walked to the local fair ground the wonder group were taking photos with the citizens of bitford and helping out. The wonder group once were vilians themselves until they realised the grief they were cursing over their home town. The wonder group started thinking about there evil doing and got lost in their own little worlds when they suddenly heard a call It defiantly woke them up from their day dreams. The wonder group picked up the phone and answered with a loud "yes we will be there". The villians were enraged that they hadn't caught the wonder group.

They went home glum. Sick and tired of not catching this helpful group. All the villians wanted to do was kill the wonder group and and make bitford a terrible place for the all the people who wished the them wrong. Eventually the villians moved away and caused no more sadness to bitford and we're never seen again well for at least four years.

2 comments:

  1. Dear: Mikayla,
    I liked your story because you used a clear plot,with interesting words that engaged me! Great effort!!!

    From Dorothy :)

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  2. dear mikayla,
    your story was great it had a good plot with lots of description.
    from jacob

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