Monday 28 April 2014

Blogger of the Week - Maddie

Mayhem Poem

Death walks in 
Sadness takes over
The roses start to bleed
They're unstoppable and they cry for water
But its the people that are in need 
For food and water
I saw one father crying for his daughter
This place is hazardous 
Watch for those bombs, yes indeed.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Everyone,
    I like to say Well Done Maddie for being blogger of the week and that poem was awesome. Great Job.
    From Tiarhn

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  2. Dear Maddie
    That poem is amazing, i showed my mum andshe was so impressed.
    where did you get your inspirasion for this poem or did it just come to you.
    Anyway i think it is an amazng poem, i wish i could write poems as well as you I recon you will be an amazing author if you ever want to become one.

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  3. Great poem Maddie! I'm proud of you. I wonder where you get all that cleverness from?? Hint hint.

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